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  1. Nice storyline.
    Subtitles a bit fast to follow, and the white not perfect against the background. That’s why most subtitles are white on black.

  2. None the less an excellent first effort. The technical issues are easily fixed with a little practice. To some extent most of the downfall parodies  have too fast text and lack of contrast. I saw one the other day that had a black strip below the film, higher contrast makes faster reading at least to my eyes. This did make the “picture” smaller. In any case pay no attention to Joe’s reply to Mike, keep’em coming. 

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